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Can you romance the Lion?

Yes. You can romance him all you want.

Good to know, thank you! :) 

Hehe yeah. Have a good night/day man!

Likewise! :) 

Man plz tell me were a wolf i kinda hate being human

Maybe, maybe not

John is hitting all those teacher/student kinks just right. had a boner whole time doing his route, wanna plow him on his desk >:3


But Seth tho, "I would kill anyone for you" so romantic +__+

such a hard choice between these two hmm

BAHA! I mean yeah they're supposed to. Hehe although I think that would hurt a ol' bear's back after awhile. Yeah, ig it is. But real shit if he says "I would walk a mile on legos for you" then shit getin real. Have a good night man

Well, i just started playing but i already have 2 things to say. 

First, the buttons that come up when you have to make a decision need to be reworked. They're not even buttons, just text with no background, and the text is white, making it very hard to read, sometimes even impossible. This urgently needs to be changed. 

The second thing is the grammar, there's a lot of errors, though this isn't as big an issue. 


Other than that, the idea of the game is quite interesting, i like it so far.

Thank you. I'm glad that you like it. With the menu choices are you on phone or pc?

I'm on Android

And for the grammar thing, i was wondering if maybe you needed help? I could help you out and correct the few errors in text if you want

Oh. Well, for Android there isn't really a fix for the menu choices. I've already tried to fix them once and it didn't work for some reason. For the grammer issue, I will be going through it throughly and fixing it. I just havnt dont it yet but Ik it needs to get done, thanks for the offer though. I hope you have a good night man.

Ah i see, thanks. 

No, thank you

Review time!!

i may or may not have happy and sad cried more than i should have in under a few hours.

the fact that i got emotionally attached to almost every character means this game is pretty much perfect storywise 

i did bump into some glitches but that was because my computer went screwy while unzipping the files

also

im totally not currently crying rn what are you talking about

amazing game 10/10 would play every route possible in one setting again

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Hehe really? Well, I'm glad you like it, but I'm sorry that you cried. It's most likely glitches in the game tbh there is alot atm. Bear hugs! have a good night! (btw ur pfp fits this)

Been a blast reading your story.  It's interesting, and look forward to read more. 

Do wish for NSFW scenes in MC dream about Seth, and so on. It seems like a good fantasy. 

A couple of problems tho. 

I can only read 3 lines, if there is 4 or more lines, it dissappear under the meny and behind / under the screen.

When choosing play style on the Ybox I got a error, also got a error a couple of others times also. 

Sometimes the lights are off, especially in the kitchen, I do see the artwork / pictures, but it's dark. 

I'm using Android 10 with screen resolution 2340 x 1080. 

I am aware of the Ybox error. God that little thing has been there for months, but I think I fixed it with the new thing that i'm gonna realise. With the line thing I guess I will have to just split some of the lines in half. I don't know why it dose that. For that NSFW scene I'll see what I can do, but I will be changing it anyways. (Rimming is too kinky for some people). With the dark thing, I forgot to make a sprite for a kitchen with a light. It will be done adventually. I hope you have a good night/day and thank you

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Awww, rimming to kinky?... Well I don't think so. It is som funn with a Demon after all, who knows what to expect what a Demon does? Well You do in this case. Guess it's hard to please everyone. Just do what you think is best. It's yours fantasy story. 

Thanks for replying, really appreciate it. 

Looking forward to updates so I can continue the story. A couple of bugs don't bother me, this is like a beta test anyway. 

Btw, it's at night atm. Love from Norway. 

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Hehe yeah. I may not change it and just leave a warming in, but most likely because the Sex scene will be more kinky. I plan on making a code after everything is done that allows there to be kinky sex scenes. I may not even do that idk. I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me some errors tbh. Well then have a good day and love from America.

A warning about sex scene is smart. Maybe opt for skip the sex scene or do the scene when it starts. I have seen this on other interactive VN's.

It's my pleasure to help, hope my input may help you. 

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Thank you, I'll prob make an option to skip. It dose help tbh thank you

Ye idk I'm just bored

I feel that

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Also I'm kinda retarded

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X to doubt

Yo random question but is pizza good like I know I've eaten it but still

I'm confuzzed. Like are you asking in genreal if it's good or like..I'm just gonna say Yes

Are there any explicit nsfw scenes ?

No there is not atm! 

Woah, how long did it took to plan this amazing well written story!

even tho there are still some error but is still making me exited for more! 

Please take your time, don't rush it!

I do believe motivation is the key to succeed. 

Hehe, well about two months for the original plan, but it's getting changed as I go along. So do I and I have a bunch of it. Have a good day/night

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I think the pizza scene is glitched as it has crashed my game but starting from the begining fixes it, there are still multiple errors around the time when you play the videogame with Max though. P.S. love the game so far

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I know about the game..game errors. Like the game inside the game..what ever. Idk why it keeps acouring I thought I fixed it, but I will look into it. The pizza scene shouldn't be glitched idk why it's doing that. Have a good day/night

Me clearing my schedule like

Hi, just curious as to if you know when the update it going to be released, I really like this game and the suspense is killing me.

Working on the Android Release atm. Havn't made it yet on this pc and I have to get the stuff for it again. Have a good night/day man! 

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It has been released! Sorry I had to sleep

Nvm my g

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Haha good i'm glad u got it fixed.

BRUH I'm having trouble downloading the newer apk i have no clue what to do 

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I love this game, it’s cute, interesting, and just all-around great. Do you know when the update is going to be released? I’m not trying to sound pushy or impatient, I’m just excited for the update.

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Hehe aww thank you. I plan to update it near the 30th. Sorry for it taking so long, but for some good news it's alot of shit. I'm already at 2820, normal day is 1500 - 2000, and I plan on having  about 800+ or so more. You don't sound pushy tbh thank you for asking. I wish you have a good day/night.

Nice, I hope you have a good day/night as well 

Is there going to be a update soon? Also i am loving this game so far.

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Yeah, sorry with christmas and new years I got set back. Also Update 9 is being pushed back abit so I will still have time to do it. 15-20 it should be done.

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ok cool😁

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Is there going to be an update soon? I really love the way you write! <3

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Yes. I got delayed because of christmas but yeah. Either at the end o f the month or by jan 20th

Hey, I have been having a problem we're none of the androids versions are working, also is there any gay sex scenes?

not any gay sex scenes atm but their will be. Maybe try downloading them again? They should be working

Seth has one doesn't he? I mean it's a dream but its still NSFW gay sex

Well yes I guess in a way but he will have a actual one in the future

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Okay, I'm literally hooked to this game now.

This game... I just don't know what to say. There are some grammatical errors, but they get over shadowed by all the good stuff. 

First of all, it tackles with a problem of sexuality, which itself is kind of a sensitive topic for some people. The bullying part is kind of sad, though I can't relate much to it, I do get called 'gay' by some people, even though I never told them or did something publicly for them to know.

Second of all, the characters are well written. In just 20 minutes of playing this game, I'm already attatched to Seth and Max. I just love them so much!

Third, I love all of the humour here, though some of it is dark. I just like how the character just goes along with Seth's dark humour as if Seth was his childhood friend and he just does that all the time.

Lastly, this game is so wholesome... Like, I love it how Seth breaks almost all of the demon stereotypes, and I also love how cute Seth can get! At the end, Seth asking the character to cuddle... it just warms my heart.

All in all, I love this game. I await eagerly for its next update!

Awe! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah they're a lot but i hope in update 9.0 they will all be gone or so. It is a very touchy subject for most people even if you haven't had any situations or anything with it. I'm glad you can't relate to it because I wouldn't wish being bullied about their sexuality on anyone. Heh thank you, they aren't really that well written yet but they will be in the future (some of them have the same characteristics and they don't stick to their personalities much). It's good that you like Seth's route the best tho tehe. Sorry about the dark humor, I can't really tell the difference of what kind of humor is accepted as normal or dark so sometimes they get mixed in. Hehe yeah, "Not all demons are bad". He was meant to not really be like a demon because it would be weird having a grumpy servant around you all the time and to point out that stereotypes of people are just general opinions. Yeah, put a man in solitude for long enough and he'll become a cuddler heh. I hope you have a good day/night 

Thanks for replying! Also, don't really worry about the dark humour. I personally love it! And, I also kind of wanna cuddle with Seth...

Also, I have a doubt. What are the species of the main character and Max? I believe Max is a canine. And the main character doesn't seem like a canine, but I wanna know what species he is. 

Anyways, again, I love your visual novel! Have a good day/night as well! 

The main character is human. He was gonna be a wolf but im gonna change it and make it more obvious  in 9.0. Max is a wolf lizard hybrid (the tail in the back is a lizard tail with fur on it). Awe hehe im glad u do and im gkad u like it so far. Ah, a fellow person of dark humor hehe.

Thanks for informing me!

Also, I wonder how you got an idea on what story the visual novel should be based on? Were you planning about this story for weeks or months before creating this game? Or did it just came out of the blue, like how it does for me when I'm writing stories?

eh, i cant really think of one off the top of my head but one with like a genie or something. Yeah ive planned the vn for a long time so i kinda even know what to do with it up to day 7. I was making ideas and adapting them till i found  a story line that would work, oh u write storys? What kind do u write?

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I was bullied over my sexuality in middle school, and my two olders sisters would see me being attacked and look the other way. That hurt, for I tried so hard to get their approval of me. I never did get it, all I got was their hatred and abuse. 

BlueBeary,

          There are only few VN that make me cry, yours is one of them. I needed that even if was not pleasant. Thank you. Keep up the great work!

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I'm sorry that you had to Indore that as a kid, a young kid at that. I hate people that are like that but unfortunaly there are many with that mind set. I hope that you don't have to deal with them anymore and your in a better place now. I'm glad that you could get something from the VN even if it was unpleasant at least. I know its not my place to intrude but..Never loose yourself while trying to hold onto someone who doesn't care about loosing you. Your sisters are toxic, they don't deserve you. Never change your self for someone else's approval when they don't deserve it. You are you and you are special, unique, and if someone trys to discriminate against your opinions, sexuality, or customs they just don't understand and they're not worth reasoning with. On a side note, Nobody can hurt you without your permission. Just because someone says that something is wrong that doesn't make them right. People and kids will always be dicks and say mean things but if those things effect you is only up to you.

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BlueBeary you is awesome, this game is so good

love you <3

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Awwwe hehe thank you, I'm glad you like it. I hope you have a good day man. Love yah too hehe <

your discord link seems to not be working, and when would we get a new update?

Do u mean the embedded one or the widget? And this month although I don't know if it will be worth it

Played your game got to say it good and I know what it like to be bullied

I'm glad you liked it, and I hope your out of that place

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i dont like it when they always show or portray men in ugly way as if they dont know what we want , give us feminine men , if you show me muscle you put me off and i leave

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Then leave

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my message is not for you , actually people who have beliefs in gods force those developers to create uglines masculinity. , disgusting

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No, they have no influence in what happens in the game. Not all people have a interest in twinks and soy boys

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soy boy keep peace in the world , not the ugly masculine ones who are atracted to wars and crimes

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Ok zoomer

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This game has scenes porn ? 

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Not  yet but they will in the future

None of the 3 Android versions will install 😭

what's the difference from newer.apk and older.apk?

Newer is for newer devices and older is for older devices, try Newer first before trying Older, obviously if Newer doesn't work then try Older first, IDK why but renpy decided to split up the normal android distribution into 3 parts, probably to solve some android version issues.

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"shut the fuck up and eat my spaghetti" is just the best quote of all quotes

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Haha yeah, I'm glad you liked it, it can be used in many ways. 

is there Seth (demon) route too? please

Yes there is!

What is a simulator apk? 

Its the apk file for like simulator things, renpy decided to split up the apk files for some reason.

….what?????   XD

Simulators. There are like things that is like a live simulator of a phone that u can use on a pc, look it up

help :c

It was supposed to say endcred but I misspleed it, you can just save there tho because that's the end.

Oh okay thanks for info

Mhmm, anytime man

Which file should I download for android?

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You should try the Newer.apk then try the Older.apk if the newer doesn't work.


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k thanks also how much gameplay time is there.

Idk around a hour or so I guess, never really tested it out.

OK thanks very good game so far.

Awe thanks, im glad your liking it so far.

help what does this mean 

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It was suppose to show the credits but in this version, it's getting this error. It's just the game's end for now.

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^ Thank you for getting to this. Yes it was supposed to be "jump endcred" but I forgot the end part. Thank you for posting this though! I really appreciate you speaking up.

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Awesome game! Could it be possible to date Mr. Owens? #'-'#


Being the "teacher's pet" doesn't sound bad AT ALL x33

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Hehehe, it dosen't sound bad at all, and Owen dose have a route so yeah you will be able to date him, thank you for the complement! #^w^#

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Hehehe no welcome. ^^
I hope Owen is a daddy type as well #^^#
Although I would prefer if he doesn't curse too much when he's mad. Yeah, the teens are asshole but he's an adult and being a teacher he surely knows what's going on to each student so he would feel more pity to these students. If the visual novel subject is about bullying and depression, he could be an anchor about "seeing things from the other side" or "there are persons who cares about your being", or something like that. Maybe every character could be that anchor.


Anyway what I really hope is Owen being a daddy type #^^#

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I mean I guess, if by a father type u mean like protective then yeah he is, that's why he got so mad when the other kids started pulling [player_name]. But yeah I'll look into trying to make him less cussing and stuff, although I will probably will just make him less aggravated because there isn't anything wrong with cussing, expesually if ur mad. But thank you for the input I'll look into it

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Yeah, there isn't anything wrong with cussing but as for being an old man he would probably refrain it a bit. But I can't say that every old man is like that, not everyone can be mature or being cool when he should explode, etc. Maybe he should be the way he's, after all.

But yeah I meant the fatherly type person. Protective and caring... Looking after for the player... petting in his head like a "good boy".... hehehe x3

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Hehe, yeah that dose sound good x3 , anyways ill look into it, thanks for the feed back

Owww... this visual novel is amazing!! There are some bugs/errors but I don't mind it because the whole history is really interesting! I can't wait for next update <3

Awwww thank you, I appreciate the feedback, yes I know there is a lot of errors, with the game and grammatically, I plan to take a week or so and fix all of the bugs, I really do appreciate ur feed back , I hope u have a good day! <3

Thanks and you too! :3

x3

Android version I'm still forced to go to lunch with Owen even when I say no plz fix

Jesus christ still? I'll try to come up with a fix to that when i get my pc back up, ill prob just make an option to jump to the right labels, although could you tell me what you choose for breakfast on day 1 and what u said to him when he asked u to stay?

For breakfast with Seth ask him what is he getting, and I picked no when asked by Owen if I got a minute. Even when I say no it still forces me to go to lunch with him

Okay I'll work on it, sorry

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